Dear mum,
I am writing this letter because I have a very big problem. It is
horrible and I am feeling very bad.
I do not know why but after I went out of doctor Jekyll
house everyone looked at me badly. They were scared of me and when they saw me they
acted like if a monster was there. I do not know what I can do I am very alone
I cannot talk to someone it is horrible I am sad now even doctor Jekyll talks
to me he disappears and I have not food or water!!
Can you please do something? it is a disaster you can
come to see me and help me. Please don’t forget about it
With love,
Bugs bunny.
Next time use contractions, because it is part of informal language. You have some mistakes as well. Keep on working
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